Paying Back A Debt...   added 5 years ago    

  By: pocahottass

They walked down the path into the woods, deeper than she'd ever been. They seemed to know where they were going, so she wasn't worried. She peeked around their broad shoulders and noticed a small cabin in the distance.

"Is that yours?" She asked Kevin. "It's awful little!"


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Dan laughed out loud.

Kevin glanced back at her, then to Dan and grinned. "It's all I need when I'm hunting."

"So you just stay out here by yourself? For days?" She curled her nose up and shook her head. "You know I'm not gonna kill something, and I definitely don't want to see you kill a poor little deer!"

They got to the cabin and Kevin opened the door, holding it open for her to check out. She walked in slowly, watching for creepy-crawlies. There was a bed, if you could call it that, in the corner and a trunk and various items hung around the walls.

"Wow... and you like to do this?" She laughed.

"Oh, I have all kinds of fun out here."

There was a weird tone to his voice that made her turn and look at him. She noticed he had hung his gun on the wall and came in as Dan stood in the doorway, blocking most of the light. The dramatic lighting made Dan look even bigger than he really was. He stretched his muscled arms and grabbed the top of the doorway, leaning against the frame.

Her attention was drawn to Kevin again as he sat down on the bed and patted the side for her to join him. She shook her head. "I'm good." She chuckled nervously. "It looks dirty." She was getting weird vibes and didn't like it. What were they doing? She glanced back at Dan and he grinned at her. Then she heard Kevin. "We have some business to take care of. Your brother owes us."

She shrugged her shoulders. "Okay, so what's new? I guess I can talk to him for you. How much does he owe you?"

"We're done talkin'. We're gonna get his attention another way." He smiled and chills ran down her back.

She jumped when the door locked and Dan laughed. He took one step and grabbed her arm. She gasped and tried to pull away, only to have him wrap both big hands around her upper arms. He jerked her back into his body, facing Kevin.

"What are you doing!" She gasped. "Let go of me!"

Kevin stood up and grabbed her chin. "You're one hot little bitch, but you know that, don't you?" He pushed her chin away and ran his hand down her left side. She jerked back into Dan as his other hand traced along the bottom of her shorts. "You wouldn't have on these little daisy dukes if you didn't."

"Kevin stop! I'll tell him whatever you want me too! I'll get you your money!" She twisted and bucked as hard as she could, to no avail.

Dan laughed, then leaned down to the back of her neck. "You better save your strength, beautiful. You're gonna need it!"

His breath sent chills down her spine and she shivered. "Please just stop!"

Kevin moved his hands underneath her tank top and traveled up her stomach. She tried desperately to lose the steel shackles of Dan's grip but it was too late. He quickly unhooked her bra and pulled her shirt up, revealing her firm breasts.

His large hands covered them and squeezed too tightly, making her squeal. Tears filled her eyes as she realized just how defenseless she was. As panic started to overtake her, she brought her heel back as hard as she could against the front of Dan's shin. When she heard the loud curse, she knew she'd hit her mark. Taking advantage, she ducked out of his grip and out of Kevin's reach. As quickly as she had the door open, she found herself thrown onto the hard cabin floor and heard the door slam shut. The lock seemed so loud as she crawled quickly to the back wall. As she turned toward them she heard Dan's cold voice. “You're gonna pay for that, honey.”

Kevin took a step toward her and she whimpered. When he stopped, she pushed the hair out of her face and tried to get up. She made it to her knees when he said, “Stop.”

She froze and looked up into his eyes. “What do you want from me?” She whispered.

He held her gaze as he reached for his belt and unhooked it. She felt the heat rise in her cheeks as the sound of his zipper echoed in her ears. Her eyes grew as she saw the size of what was in his hand.

“Come here. You know what I want.”

When she shook her head and stood up, he quickly grabbed her by her hair and shoved her back to her knees. His huge cock was right in front of her and she tried to turn her head. She tried to free her hair from his grip, only to have him pull tighter, making her scream. Dan was suddenly behind her, getting both her tiny wrists in one of his big hands. His breath was hot on the back of her neck as he warned her, “You better just open that mouth and be a good little whore. Then you might be able to walk tomorrow.”

Then Kevin's voice came from above her. “Open wide bitch.” He shoved his dick against her quivering lips and she obeyed. She had to open her mouth as wide as she could to even keep her teeth off it. He groaned as she sucked the head and worked her mouth back and forth.

“You can do better than that. I want to feel the back of your fucking throat!”

He forced her head down even further until she was gagging. Tears spilled from her eyes as he finally pulled out and let her gasp for breath. Before she recovered, he drove himself deep into her throat again, making her gag, then pumping a few times before giving her another breather.

Her wrists were freed then and she grabbed Kevin's leg for support. Suddenly, Dan's voice brought her attention to another big cock on her right side. “My turn, bitch. Gag yourself or I'll do it for you.”

She closed her eyes and took his dick in her mouth. Doing as she was told, she gagged herself again and again, until she couldn't take anymore. All the while, her hands were working on Kevin's shaft. When they pulled away, she looked up to see both of them standing over her. She opened her mouth and closed her eyes tight.

“Damn, she thinks we're done with her, doesn't she?” She heard them both laugh and opened her eyes. “You little whore. You've done this before, haven't you?”

She shook her head, her face red. “NO! I've only ever been with my boyfriend!”

Dan grabbed her by the hair and jerked her to her feet. “Don't worry, we won't stop until we break you in real good. I still owe you for a bruise on my shin.” With that, he threw her onto the bed. Before she could think,She froze as he slid the side of the knife down her shoulder. She flinched when he sliced first one strap to her tank top, then the other. He  roughly pulled the top down to expose her once again. Taking her breasts in his hands, he squeezed them until she cried out and pushed against his hands.

He backed away only to begin shoving his pants down his legs. She gasped as Dan was already naked and collapsed on top of her. He took her breasts in his hands and started sucking on her nipples. She began twisting underneath him, trying to free herself from his mouth. His hands left her breasts and found the button on her shorts. “NO! NO! Please!”

Her begging seemed to fuel his need as he quickly sat up and began jerking down her shorts. “My dick is so hard. I'm gonna rip you open bitch!”

She fought back, landing a kick into his side. Suddenly she was lifted off the bed and was staring into Kevin's eyes. “If you don't start being a good little girl, I will turn you over and shove this cock into your tight little ass. Would you like that?”

The color drained from her face. “N...NO! Please don't!”

“Have you ever been fucked in the ass?”

She shook her head, “No...”

Dan was still on the bed. “Put that bitch back on my dick.”

Kevin forced her to bend over on the edge of the bed and Dan forced her mouth back down on his hard cock. Kevin slapped her ass again and again, making her cry out around Dan's dick. When her ass was nice and red, Kevin pulled her legs apart and found her clit. He ran his thumb over it as she gagged on the dick in her mouth. When she tried to close her legs, he slapped her ass so hard she screamed. He opened her legs back and leaned down to lick her pussy. She whimpered and realized she was moving back and forth against his tongue. When he quit she actually cried out and heard him laugh. “You like that, little whore?”

Then she felt his dick entering her pussy. He was bigger than she could take. She brought her head up and tried to pull away only to have Dan shove her head back down by his shaft. Kevin's hands had pulled her pussy open and he was pushing this cock in further. She cried out as he forced her tiny pussy to take every inch of his huge cock. He leaned over her back and fucked her as hard as he could. She cried out with every thrust, begging him for mercy. He finally stopped, but stayed buried deep inside her.

His fingers toyed with her clit as he taunted her, “You sure you've done this before? You're so fucking small.” He started slowly pulling his dick out and she shivered. With the next movement, he shoved it as far as it would go. Dan slid down underneath her body. Kevin pulled out and made her slide down onto Dan's dick. He groaned out load, “Damn, she IS small!”

She cried out as he began to pump her and Kevin shoved her down against Dan. He put his arms around her tight and held her still as he continued to thrust up into her.

Kevin then spread her ass cheeks wide and spit on her hole. Realization hit that she was about to be violated in the worst way she could think of. She tried to fight back and couldn't budge. “You said only if I fought! Please don't do this! I can't take it!”

“Shut up you stupid bitch! I'm gonna rip you open for real!”

His finger forced its way into her asshole. She begged for him to stop and got another finger shoved in. “You know you want this as much as I do.” She struggled against Dan's arms and felt him shove them in even deeper. He pulled out to spit on her again and shoved the fingers back inside her.

Then she felt him pull out and position his dick between her ass cheeks. She whimpered one last time before he shoved his way inside her. The scream she let loose made Dan start fucking her pussy even harder. Kevin pulled out a little bit and shoved his dick so far she screamed again. “Yeah, take it all bitch! I'm gonna make you take all my cum in that tight little ass!” He started thrusting then, again and again until she couldn't do anything but cry as they both fucked her.

She felt Kevin stiffen behind her and his dick stretched her ass even more. With one final, painful thrust, she felt his cum shooting inside her ass. “NO!” She felt it pulsing inside her and she collapsed in defeat on top of Dan's chest.

Kevin pulled out and Dan quickly rolled on top of her and straddled her chest, his dick aimed at her face. He began jacking off and ordered her to open her mouth. She did as she was told and saw him stiffen. She closed her eyes tightly as the hot cum shot all over her face and neck. She tried to turn her head but he pulled her mouth up to take him in her mouth. He made her lick him clean as she gagged from the salty taste of his cum.

Dan then let her go and got off the bed. She slowly pulled her legs up to her chest and wiped her face clean on the covers. Shivering, she sat up on the bed and started to cry.

“I say that made a decent first payment.” Kevin chuckled as he fastened his belt back. As he pulled his shirt on, he added, “Don't worry, you'll have all weekend with us to pay him off.”

With that they slammed the cabin door behind them. She looked up in shock as she heard the final sound of a lock from the outside.

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bamababe    (2011-03-09 06:15:22)    Flag as inappropiate
VERY husband and i are gonna fuck til dawn after reading that.thank you
easypeasy    (2010-12-25 10:18:15)    Flag as inappropiate
Wow, very hot! Couldn't help fingering myself a little as I read, that's how hot. ;) Thanks!
elDiablito212    (2010-12-21 13:03:42)    Flag as inappropiate
Great story. I really liked your writing style which was very readable and descriptive. Please, write some more.
CanadianCasanova    (2010-12-20 13:49:51)    Flag as inappropiate
CanadianCasanova Hot story! I hope you write more!
SassyGrlNstDr    (2010-12-19 17:15:51)    Flag as inappropiate
SassyGrlNstDr Loved it! I would love to visit your cabin in the woods.

pocahottass    (2010-12-13 22:39:41)    Flag as inappropiate
pocahottass Sorry it's so long! I was just having too much fun and didn't want it to end! ;-P

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